come on you guys!!
let me try something i'm writing this on the spot... :wacko:
Andy had never killed before... but he always said he would. He was always sure he meant it too but he never expected it could happen like this.
The weather was cold, a dangerous sheet of ice palmed the roads. Andy was already catching Z's if only with his eyes open, they were tight with tire. His day had been like i big stick beating on his back all throughout. He couldn't focus on anything, not even crawling into his bed.. all he thought of was... nothingness.
His car began drifting... clipping the shrubbery at the sides of the road. Every few feet mowed off leaves and branches.. He didn't notice... he wasn't even awake.
Suddenly he came to with a sharp pain in his neck.. He was lying down. His face contorted under the stabbing in is neck which seemed to wake as he did. His eyes adjusted to the light, leaves , branches and then trees came into his view. it took him awhile to recollect him self.. What he was doing there stuck to the ground in pain.. He tried ... his memory failed him. He found himself standing up, the pain still nagging him, all around him was a field. Full of flowers and shrubbery of all colors.. The sky was a gentle shade of blue with few clouds covering the sun.
He tried convincing himself it was not heaven.. he was right but his lack of memory convinced him of nothing concrete. He slowly remembered his car, he was driving.. then .. nothing.. his car was not here... he stood confused and bewilderd.
He suddenly heard a noise far of... turning with care difficultly he spotted a man running towards him screaming. Some strange utterance echoed along the field. As the man drew closer and Andy grew more concerned he recognized English phrases, was it? he strained to hear.. He could see the man now but the gentleman had no malice in his face, in fact he was smiling, almost glad to see Andy. Andy was still wary he didn't know this strange exuberant man.He finally met Andy and with exasperated breath, struggling with exhaustion to speak " Hey I was wondering when you would come...." he said in dead stare.. a change Andy noticed...."Andy"
Andy was shocked, his pain subsided into a nervous shudder.
"You know me?" Andy asked.
"What a stupid question mate, Of course I bloddy know you." the man said his face becoming as perplexed as Andy was. " I know everything about you"
Andy shrank..
"wha..." was all he could say.
" I know everything... Andy.. Dont you remember"
"uh..- i dunno what to.. i dont know you." was all he could exhale.
"well" the man said "Thats a problem."
A huge shock hit Andy in his chest, he felt it like a big hole. The tired stranger kept staring as if nothing was amiss. As is vision clouded he saw a glint of light, the outline of a gun.. He began to feel cold.. it wasn't raining as he could tell, he felt the warm life leaving him like blood. He felt the fear of dying now.. it was inevitable.. he tried to get way but had no strength.. His vision dimmed again as he groaned in pain... then nothingness.
TO BE CONTINUED... muhahahahha
. Whats the longest story anyone here ever wrote? Mine was probably for common entrance.. lol years ago. Haven't written anything since.. but i wanna start now. Its never to late.
